David Green

David Green (Books) is the imprint under which I published booklets of my own poems. The original allocation of ISBN numbers is used up now, though. The 'Collected Poems' are now available as a pdf. The website is now what it has become, often more about music than books and not so often about poems. It will be about whatever suggests itself.

Thursday, 5 December 2024

Murakami, The City and its Uncertain Walls

Haruki Murakami, The City and its Uncertain Walls (Harvill Secker)  

It's more of the same. Murakami is now 75 and that's not the sort of age at which one strikes out in a new direction. There'd be more consternation if he did than a Times reviewer stating the obvious, that we've seen it all before.
The unnamed first person is a dream reader in the library of a city that has no fixed shape. He loses touch with his teenage girlfriend. The unicorns are gratuitous. He moves to a small, provinicial town in a mountainous area to be chief librarian. People are separated from their shadows. Mr. Koyasu established this library but has died although returns regularly to provide advice and guidance. A teenage boy with savant syndrome in a parka with a Yellow Submarine motif concentrates intently on wide-ranging reading matter. And on, and on.
It's never quite the right time to ask such banal questions as whether we are dealing with parallel realities, dreams, ghosts, the sub-conscious or what. If it wasn't for the customary low-key, casual ordinariness of the Murakami genre I'm sure I'd find fault with it at every level for being cult/fantasy/dreamworld/surreal/science-fiction/alternative reality and any other adolescent irrelevance one cares to mention. One would love to draw the line at dreams and say such an old device has long had its day but, then again, it's part of a long tradition.
It doesn't mean anything quite so specific although here, more than anywhere he ever has before, Murakami explicitly refers to magic realism and Marquez, and identifies one of the places his character goes to as a place 'deep down in your consciousness'. Like anything that has gone beyond its initial novelty, it's comfortable by now and, if ever Murakami represented the shock of something new there was always a balance between the mundane and the strangeness and we have become so accustomed to the strangeness that even that is gently familiar, too.
He's almost showing us his workings now and telling us that, no, there was no more to it than any of the ready-made interpretations we might have brought to it. But that's not what some of us wanted. Sometimes we want mystique, to be left not knowing 'what that was all about' but thinking that we'd enjoyed it nonetheless.
My Murakami shelf overflows with this latest hefty volume - I'm sure it could have been achieved in at least 100 pages fewer but the repetitive snowfall, the recurrent motifs and the inconsequential detail are all part of the slow movement. Other shelves overflow, too, as further books by or about writers one has signed up to threaten the semblance of order in one's own library. It is books for book's sake, words for word's sake and fiction for fiction's sake. If Andy Warhol reproduced reductive images on a mass scale, Murakami achieves an equal if opposite effect by writing at length endlessly detailed evocations of extraordinary things in ordinary circumstances that might, at a stretch, be compared with Cervantes.
His books are commodities, as much lifestyle choices as they are art. They come with their recommended dose of sadness, their glimpses of beauty and wonder, their daily routine and, I still hope, some 'postmodern' lack of an answer.
If nothing else, I want to be the first, and only, reviewer -if I can be be- to find the parallel between Murakami's first person here in his provincial library and the time spent by Philip Larkin in his first such job in Wellington, Shropshire. Murakami's Beatles obsession may or may not extend into the English poetry of the time but it's a fit, a palpable fit, and it's best if we can make our own such connections and not know because if we are still post-modern, still de-constructed and like to remain floating and contingent, I'd rather not know than know.   

Wednesday, 4 December 2024

Poetry Quiz

Portsmouth Poetry Society's December meeting was thus its seasonal event this evening, the quiz provided by me.

The Acrostic Sonnet puzzle was considered 'advanced' and so it was the first lines we did. Have a go yourselves now, if you fancy it. Answers to follow later, or available on application.

An Acrostic Sonnet

The fifteen crossword-style clues represent the title and fourteen lines, in two stanzas, of a sonnet. The first letters of each answer will then reveal a further poet.

He’s in toilets getting changed but not initially. ( 5 )

We loll about, Robert.  ( 6 )

Visually descriptive or figurative language. ( 7 )

‘Ha ha in Zep’, he could say, differently. ( 9 )

Consonants concentrated consecutively, that’s it! (12)

He and she are in the gravy. ( 8 )

Her first name would sit well with her second. ( 5 )

Two Welshmen and an Englishman, one of them in a pub. ( 6 )

He recollected azure heights. ( 7 )

 

Lord, he’s in Be My Baby, Ronettes. ( 5 )

Poem by Kipling, conditionally. ( 2 )

He uses pens erratically and is hiding somewhere there. (7)

Carpe diem was his advice. ( 6 )

Autumn, melancholy and a nightingale provided Keats with them. ( 4 )

She sounds like she has airs, if not Grace’s ( 3 )

Famous Opening Lines

Fill in the missing word and name the poet

1. Whan that ------ with his shoures soote

2. Of Man's First Disobedience, and the -----

3. Morning and evening

    Maids heard the ------- cry:

    “Come buy our orchard fruits,

    Come buy, come buy:

    4. Next to my own skin, her ------. My mistress

        bids me wear them, warm them, until evening   

    5. When I am an old woman I shall wear ------

    6. ----- has not any thing to show more fair:

    7.  I saw the best minds of my generation destroyed by -------

    8.  Nobody heard him, the dead man,  

         But still he lay moaning:

         I was much further out than you thought  

         And not ------ but drowning.

    9.  How do I love thee? Let me count the ----.

   10. Had we but world enough and ----

Romanticism, with notes

New from DGBooks and the swansong of the imprint having now used up the 10 free ISBN numbers issued in 1990.
Please don't order it from anywhere that it's listed. You can have one for the asking while stocks last.
Some notes on the poems-
Rainyday Woman takes its title from a horse that was winning races at the time, not from Bob Dylan. I had a poem I liked without a title and a poem that didn't work that had a good title so they were merged together.
Starý židovský Hřbitov, the Old Jewish Cemetery, in Prague eventually presented itself as idea when the theme of the 2020 Portsmouth Poery Society was 'pebbles'. I'm not very taken with the idea of writing on prescribed themes but that's the second time that the competition has given rise to a poem that would never have been written otherwise.
Situation and Lockdown Trains were both reactions to the lockdown situation. The first prompted by one of the many lines noted from Proust which served as a fitting epigraph.
The title poem came during and after a visit to Netley Abbey and the cover photograph of early C19th graffiti. I sat in the grounds making some preliminary notes like a painter sketching a scene before organizing them later.
Canute at Bosham and Thomas Weelkes in Chichester are historical figures in their nearby settings. I usually sit by the stained glass window of Weelkes at Chichester Cathedral concerts which is also next to the Arundel Tomb made famous by Philip Larkin.
Hammershøi
is based on this painting of which there is a print on my front room wall.
Ronnie came after reading a biography of Phil Spector and incorporates references from their songs.
Escape Artist was reworked extensively from a failed Rosemary Tonks pastiche that had been abandoned. Having been invited to contribute to the book, Inspired by Six Women who Shook the World, I was glad to be able to do a rare repair job.
Altair was for my great niece's time capsule for when she reaches 18. 
Nativity is vivid enough as a childhood memory but the reasons for writing it only last year, on 3/12, are not.
Success was initially suggested by somes lines in praise of Utrecht in The Upside-Down World by Benjamin Moser but may owe something to Larkin's Posterity. It sometimes only dawns on one that one has re-written a Larkin poem sometime after the fact.
Slightly Different Version, Rainy Morning Man and Imperfect, as suggested in the titles of the first two, are variations on Rainyday Woman in which the relationship with poetry is conflated with the non-commital relationship with a generic, or composite, girlfriend. I was encouraged when finding an echo of their attitude today in Murakami's The City and its Uncertain Walls,
I think the emotional and physical function needed in order to love - the kind of overarching impulse to give your whole self to another - had burned out in me long ago. 
Curtains, with its obvious double meaning, came from thinking about Nottingham in the 1960's, as did Nativity and Move Over Darling, from the previous booklet, and the plan to go back to those places next year.

It might read like a downbeat book read all at once, which it easily can be, and if such moods served Hardy and Larkin's poetry so well it can't be a bad thing but I hope it's not overly melancholic.
There is one typo, at least. There's an accent on 'cortège' in Curtains but not in Canute but one of them must be right.               
 

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